Tuesday 13 April 2021

Week 7 Camp Kaitawa 2021

Hi my name is Cash and im a year 6 from Wainui Beach School and this is my slide's about year 6s going to camp Kaitawa.

On the slide's it has writing for what we did on each day and how i felt. I have also put some of the pictures for each thing we did I hope you like it. 







2 comments:

  1. Dear Cash, I very much liked your lay out for the pictures along with your beautiful backgrounds. One thing that I think that you could do better on was the color of your writing. The problem with the white lettering is that against most of your slightly busy backgrounds is it's just a little hard to read.
    Your blog reminds me of your very cool human pyramid. One question was it hard to hold everyone up? I very much liked your blog.

    Nathan

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  2. Dear Cash, I very much liked your lay out for the pictures along with your beautiful backgrounds. One thing that I think that you could do better on was the color of your writing. The problem with the white lettering is that against most of your slightly busy backgrounds is it's just a little hard to read.
    Your blog reminds me of your very cool human pyramid. One question was it hard to hold everyone up? I very much liked your blog.

    Nathan

    ReplyDelete

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