Hi my name is Cash and yesterday we had an action day. We were going to walk to the end of our awa Hamanatua stream. I was wearing gumboots lucky because it was raining really hard the night before. 30 minutes later we got to the first gate koka Rozie was explaining what to do around the animals on the farm.
Straight away we had to cross a little stream it was Hamanatua just it was a lot smaller I had gumboots so was fine but a lot of people had shoes and had to get wet. Splash swish as I walk across Hamanatua koka Rozie told us to go up the hill a little more.
I was watching people try jump over the stream but Lola jump then Rio had to throw her bag over you can tell by now that something bad is going to happen. Swing swing wee splash!! as her bag landed right in the middle of the stream she gets her bag and you tell thats she will be crying in the inside and Rio will be saying sorry the hole trip. The End
Dear Cash, I really like your blog post because you put in extra words to tell us what it sounded like. Next time you might want to make the blog go over the whole length of the trip, not just the beginning. You should try rereading a little better because parts of your writing does not make sense. over all your blog is fine,
ReplyDeleteSincerely yours,
Nathan