Hi Cash it's Nathan, you're blogging buddy. I like it that when you started talking like you were apart of the writing you didn't just switch half way through because that mabye it easier to read. This blog reminds me of one of my first blogs which was back to school too. I think you could have added more info from lunch to 3:00pm but overall I liked it. Just next time try to write the blog like the you watched it not like you were apart of it. I hope to read another blogpost soon, bye.
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Hi Cash it's Nathan, you're blogging buddy. I like it that when you started talking like you were apart of the writing you didn't just switch half way through because that mabye it easier to read. This blog reminds me of one of my first blogs which was back to school too. I think you could have added more info from lunch to 3:00pm but overall I liked it. Just next time try to write the blog like the you watched it not like you were apart of it. I hope to read another blogpost soon, bye.
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