On a Tuesday afternoon Moana syndicate went to the beach for the afternoon me and my friends dug a big hole. Then we started to make a big wall so the water didn't destroy our creation. We called it the wall of Gisborne it survived the first wave and the second wave but then it started to collapse so we fixed it and made another wall in front of it but it collapsed on the first wave that hit it.
Then "The wall of Gisborne" really started to collapse and we had to get some reinforcements we got some sticks and put them on the side's of the wall of Gisborne. It hit again it just about fell over this time then I went and got the biggest log I could lift and put it in front of the wall of Gisborne. Then the wave came but it was ready this time it hit and it survived the wave. Then we had to go back and I don't know if it was still standing when it got hit again by a wave and we changed the name to 'big chungus".
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